Subject: [Enum] NITS on draft-ietf-enum-combined...

From: Alexander Mayrhofer <[email-masked]>
Date: Wed, 08 Aug 2007 14:12:11 +0200

I've performed another NITS review on the "combined" draft - here are my
(editorial) comments - they can probably be fixed together with other
comments from the publication process:

- Section 5: Maybe it would make sense to explicitely state that for country
code 1, the POSITION is 1, because i was slightly confused by that sentence
about the NANP (it's in the algorithm anyway, but i think it would be good,
though)

- I'd like to see "ITU-T" expanded in the doc somewhere

- Section 6: First sentence contains a redundant 'the': "the the".

- Section 7: There is a redundant "." behind the DNAME reference

that's all

--alex

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